Virgin Territory
Posted by harlan on 10 Apr 2008 at 10:56 am | Tagged as: talking to the void
It’s official. B. and I made love last night. I am no longer a virgin. Despite the pain, it was a sacred moment that I’ll never forget. Both of us laughed, both of us cried, and all at different times.
The odd thing is that I actually feel different today. It seems like a huge weight has been lifted from me. I feel NORMAL. I can’t tell you how great that feels. I’m blabbering.
Here’s the story. I had a bunch of nervous energy, so I left work early and went over to Walmart to buy some flowers and a copy of Atonement. Since there was no way I was going to risk a repeat of last week, I paid with cash. And since I was going to be standing in line with my purchases in full display, I also picked up an inflatable camping mattress and some Durex XXL condoms.
Back at the condo, I broke my old habit of never locking up when I’m home. I dead-bolted the door so that B. had to ring the bell. When the doorbell finally rang at 7:59, I froze on the couch. Part of me wanted to hunker down and not answer. When the bell rang a third time, a different part of me seemed to carry my body to the front door. For the rest of the night — or at least for most of it — I felt split like that, as if the sheltered part of me just decided to sit in the back seat and watch the other part of me go.
B. was wearing the same dress she wore when she ate the bad eel rolls.
She and I hugged and patted each other. I handed her the flowers and DVD. It looked like she wanted to say something, thought better of it, and said, “Thanks. Let’s go.” Then she turned around and started walking in that weird way of hers, as if she’s stumbling under the weight of a backpack filled with bricks. I followed.
I thought we were going to dinner, but she drove straight to her apartment. Just as well. My stomach was in spin cycle mode. B. had the lights dimmed and she was playing what I thought at first was classical music but was really musak. I know this because I recognized the tune of “Wicked Game.” We both drank from wine glasses that had already been poured.
B. hadn’t said much all night. In fact, I asked if something was wrong. Nothing was wrong, she said. Was she angry with me?
“No. I don’t want to talk, and I don’t want you to talk. I’m in a good place right now. I’m going to open my heart to you. And you open your heart to me.”
She led me by the hand into her bedroom. More than half of her bed was covered with stuffed animals and pillows of all sizes and shapes. The room smelled like peach candles. Oh yeah. Even though I may lose a number of readers with strong moral values, I feel compelled to warn you at this point that what I write may contain information of a sexually graphic nature.
As we took our clothes off, my head was spinning and my heart was pounding. A debate between warring factions raged inside my head. B said something like, “Remember — It is our light, not our darkness that most frightens us.” I didn’t know if she was talking to me or to herself.
It was one of those contradictory experiences in which time seems to be standing still yet the moment is over in a flash. As we finished undressing – by the way, things would have gone a lot faster if I had a pair of scissors — B made that weird look where she wrinkles her nose and flashes her teeth. We kissed and rubbed.
Then we climbed onto the bed.
While I have hardly any experience with sexual intimacy, I’ve seen my fair share of sexual acts, and I’ll just go ahead and say that it looks a whole lot easier to do on film than in real life. Putting the condom on was no problem. It was the next phase. I don’t want to be too graphic, but let’s just say I was aiming wrong. In fact, I got so frustrated that B actually laughed.
With B’s help, I finally went inside. At that point, instinct took over and I started bucking comfortably with B on top of me. She made strange bleating noises that made me laugh. We got into a rhythm that made me feel like I could go for hours.
Then it happened.
My brain shut off. I was thinking in shapes and colors. All I know is that I felt a deep connection to B. I’m sure my eyes rolled back in my head as I gave myself over to sensual celebration. We were like two wolverines caught in a dryer.
The magic moment didn’t last long. I don’t have the kind of brain that can be shut out for long. While still moving in rhythm, I started thinking about who B. had been with before me. Even though she had never mentioned previous boyfriends, I was sure I wasn’t her first lover. How many men had she been with? One? Three? Thirty-seven? One hundred and thirty-seven? Who were these hundred and thirty-seven jerks? I imagined them dragging the panties off a young B. in the back seats of cars or in dark basements, and I hated the horny bastards. Damn them!
I changed my position to get a better angle, and something bad happened. I came out of her a little bit and she landed down hard on Little Harlan. It felt like it bent in half. I rolled to my side and tried not to yelp in agony. Tears came to my eyes. I said I was sorry.
“Are you OK?” she said.
“I think so. But I think I’m done for the night. Sorry.”
We lay in bed together, both of us wet from sweat. I never realized that sex was so messy and wet – and warm. It was all very wonderful and very strange, from the sacred intimacy to the odor of dead fish inside an old man’s tennis shoe. I hugged B. She was crying tears of happiness.
I’m in love.
Isolation score: 0.0
That’s truly beautiful harlan - even if the word bucking did made a feel a little queasy.
Love?
Eff.
I yet have to read this post but needed to share my excitement because it is finally posted. Harlan, I’m addicted to you.
I just threw up my breakfast pizza. This was the weirdest sex I think I’ve ever read about. Wolverines in a dryer? Really? Enough with the vomit-inducing metaphors. My big question: does the vag match the arms?
Wolverines in a dryer…right on, stud!
Wolverines caught in a dryer? I’m really sick. I may not be back for quite a while.
The odor of dead fish in an old man’s tennis shoe? A strange bleating noise? I’ve got to go, too.
Wow Harlan. Congratulations. I’m a bit jealous, but I’m sure B. is a good woman for you. Just one question. Is the odor of dead fish inside an old man’s tennis shoe what sex smells like? or was it just you?
Or was the odor B? Ughgh.
Sex shouldn’t smell that way Harlan. There’s a sex smell that is intoxicating — filled with heat and passion, yummy smells of sweat and love.
And then there’s dead fish in a tennis shoe….
That’s. Not. Right. At. All.
Oh for the love of God, you DID manage to fuck this up. Not as badly as I had thought, but none theless, you managed to get little H folded like yesterdays laundry. So, if I’m reading this right, you had sex, but no-one came, that’s pretty much the summary of your life, so I wouldn’t think it would be too out of the norm for ya.
On the bright side, you have jerk off material for years now, regardless of how long it takes you to fuck this relationship up. I mean hell, B might one day ask you where your smile went, at which point you’d no doubt key the shit outta her car, piss on her leg, and tell her “she’s just like that evil fuck at work”
At least you won’t die a virgin now, though a little happy squirt at the end is preferable to most people, over the wounded willy finish.
dead fish inside an old man’s tennis shoe? your girl needs to get herself checked out. congratulations nonetheless. sweet story. true or not i guess
You’re such a liar.
This whole thing sounds as fishy as the smell coming from the old man’s tennis shoe.
pity-the-foo’
H, we HAVE A RELATIONSHIP! Why would you feel the need to lie and tell us you bought XXL condoms?
By the way, those were not tears of happiness, her eyes were burning from the dead fish smell.
I cannot believe this shit. Gross out!
she needs to go to the doctor or wash up, that aint normal.
If you need to get all misty, that’s fine, but please consider the possibility that you’re in love with sex, not with B.
And the inflatable camping mattress? WHAT HAPPENED to the camping mattress????
i came.
Okay, THAT was vivid enough to pull me out of lurkerdom only to say HOLY CRAPSTICKS!!!!!! I gotta stop reading this at work. I was rolling on the floor in hysterics and, really, my job should not be that funny so it was a little suspect.
“We were like two wolverines caught in a dryer.” Golden!
Oh my gosh. You guys are hilarious.
Wait…was it her vajayjay that smelled like fish in an old shoe? NAST.
P.S. I’ve always thought sex smells a little bit like crayola crayons and pencil shavings. Anyone?
Spoon, only when you’re hittin it with a four year old.
This is such sheer crap it’s fantastic. I can’t stop laughing… wow. Romance writer you are not.
If anyone STILL thinks this blog is real, they won’t after reading this sh*t.
Ok and now I can’t stop laughing at all these comments. the readers are so much better than the author!
We were like two wolverines caught in a dryer?????????????? That is the BEST explanation I have EVER heard in my life!!!!!!!! Fishy smells? Hmmm, Harlan, your going to need to get some experiences, fishiness is not a smell you want. Um, camping mattress? Oh dear, I don’t know what I would do without this blog. I have been needing this post! I LOVE that B wore the same dress as she did with the whole puke incident. I am so happy you finally did this, I can’t wait to hear about more experiences!! Poor mini harlan, I hope you recover well.
Your not in love with B, your in love with sex. Fran is right. I think many people think they fall in love as soon as they have sex, just don’t go out and become a man slut. lol
Please tell B thank you. I have been waiting for this!
Also, Harlan, next time, get all the cheese out of the folds before you hit it. Sweat hitting that shit is NAST! Tell her she probably has the world’s worst yeast infection, too, because no one’s donut hole is supposed to smell anything like:
Old Men
Tennis Shoes
Dead Fish.
Now, I understand B’s a big ol girl, and sometimes those aren’t the cleanest chicks, but I’m not tiny, and my hoohoo smells like a new car. Tell her to stop using the same washrag for her dishes and her pooter, and she’ll probably get rid of that stench.
ConGypsCo,if you don’t mind my asking, what’s the make and model of your cootchie and does it have low mileage?
Wow, wow….
the Beast with two back beards
The last few entries have been hilarious and the comments KILL me. Especially ConGypsCo!
Congratulations Harlan.
Add a new song to the playlist, Harlan:
Frank Zappa - Jumbo Go Away.
love makes the world go round, like two wolverines in a dryer. respect h.
A very satisfying account of your first time, Harlan. I’m sitting here with a goofy grin on my face, happy for you. Happy for all of us sharing your experience vicariously.
Glad that you are finally over the hump, so to speak. In order to master sexual techniques to increase pleasure and avoid unwanted pain you have to do the same thing that musicians do in order to get to Carnegie Hall–practice, practice, practice!
ConGypsCo, your hoohoo smells like a new car? Somehow, I’m not convinced that is a good thing. It may be better than old men playing tennis with dead fish but still…
I’m speechless.
ConGypsCo..hoohoo and pooter all in the same sentence. I’m humbled.
Harlan, tell B not to wipe her ass with a forward motion…that will help the smell. Definitly don’t take your mouth down south until you get that area cleared up.
Oh.dear.God! So many thoughts, so little time to share. I hope you didn’t break little H. If you’re still in pain, go to the ER right now and explain. They can fix those problems. As for the love bit, that’s your brain responding to sex the way evolution intended: serotonin, dopamine, intimacy, attachment. It’s great that you can laugh together. I hope it happens again for you. Soon. With you on top. Behind. Sideways. Reverse cowgirl. Maybe even lotus position…
There once was an amorous gent
Who was up for his first big event.
But t’was hard to respond
Once his poor wand
Went and got itself bent.
(I tried to work in something about new-car scent — the great sub-theme of this comment section — but couldn’t get it to work.)
she almost got fucked in the ass.
Asshat, it’s a Toyota Prius, only 15000 miles, it has a kickass resale value if you’re interested. And Spoon is right-tell her front to back only! Otherwise, you’re gonna have puppy-dirt mouth. BLECH!
Can I also just say that I’ve been thinking about this all day, and you know how in “The Forty-Year-Old Virgin” when he said that the rat-a-tat-ta-tas had the consistency of sand? is that what we have going on here? Same with the wolverine comments. Jesus, I can’t stop laughing.
So I thought this was totally obvious, and I’m fairly disapointed that no one has yet pointed out that THE FISH SMELL IS BECUASE SHE DIDN’T WASH THE DRESS SINCE SHE PUKED UP RAW FISH ON HERSELF AND HARLAN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Either that, or she didn’t wash herself since she puked up raw fish…
Did either of you say anything really stupid?
My first time, the woman I was with said, “Slipery when wet,” just as I was going in. On it’s own, no big deal, but it was on my mind. Then she kept calling me “Jon,” and then right in the middle she started singing “woah, we’re half way there, woah living on a prayer…”
I couldn’t have lost a woody faster if you’d hooked my balls up to a battery.
censorship: alive and rampant at soveryalone.com
Maybe: What the hell are you talking about? I haven’t stopped a single comment from coming through, including yours, even though most of the comments (including, again, yours) are incredibly insulting. So you might want to climb off your high horse for a moment and reassess your claim.
- Harlan
Leland, that may be one of the funniest things I’ve ever read.
Leland, Congypsco, and Asshat, those are seriously hilarious comments and I can not stop laughing. Ahhh, the post was funny enough as it was and you guys just took it to the next level.
Ohhh my GOD!!! Normally I just read the posts and get a chuckle but between the post and comments, I’ve almosted pissed myself laughing.
Whether true or not, I would say it’s a shame if poor Harlan thinks a ladies hoohoo should smell like fish and tennis shoes. Harlan, don’t believe it, lady parts should smell like a fresh spring morning in the mountains. If you continue your little tryst the hunker down fish woman, please don’t go down on her. Seriously. There’s a good chance you’ll get a yeast infection in your mouth, and sweetie, you don’t need anything else to make you feel self conscious.
Ohhh my GOD!!! Normally I just read the posts and get a chuckle but between the post and comments, I’ve almosted pissed myself laughing.
Whether true or not, I would say it’s a shame if poor Harlan thinks a ladies hoohoo should smell like fish and tennis shoes. Harlan, don’t believe it, lady parts should smell like a fresh spring morning in the mountains. If you continue your little tryst with the fish woman, please don’t go down on her. Seriously. There’s a good chance you’ll get a yeast infection in your mouth, and sweetie, you don’t need anything else to make you feel self conscious.
Thanks, ConGypsCo. I’ve got a Toyota too but she’s getting old and I’ve been thinking about trading her in on a newer model. What kind of mileage do you get with that cootchie?
I wish you could have seen my face as I read this entry. First was an audible gasp when I read the first line. Hand over the mouth and everything. Then I couldn’t stop laughing. Then it got worse as I read B’s lines. My brother was wondering what was so funny on tv. Then I saw how everything started going wrong. Then it ended exactly like I thought it would. Thankyou for this Harlan. I feel like the weeks of reading this blog led to this culmination of this moment. Thankyou for letting me have this moment
Asshat, I have an 8 year old Toyota Crapolla. Mileage is about 100,000 miles in American-speak but I take pretty good care of her. I recommend frequent cleaning and servicing. I spray the interior with Febreeze often to keep her smelling fresh. And the alloy wheels are a real problem because she spends a lot of time on the road. There are some great cleaners out there but you have to get down on your hands and knees and really put your back into it. Lubricants are very important as well. I keep her well-oiled and use new lube every few months and she performs nicely. Haven’t had any problems yet but I do look at the newer, shinier cars and feel a twinge of longing. Sometimes I guess you just have to suck it up and trade in for an upgrade. Something that will really hug the curves and purr when you get her going.
Congrats Harlan. I’ve been reading this blog since it was nominated for the Bloggies Award (glad you won). I’m really happy your life is going well. Don’t let others get you down. :-)
You know - nope I really dont have anything to add. It’s all been pretty much said..
Mo and ass yall rock
Careful there big H - Love and Sex are not the same thing.
Sounds like a clean machine, Moshizzle. I’m happy for you that it didn’t get a little rusty during this long Canadian winter. You might find that a good Brazilian waxing really helps the curb appeal.
i’ve always wondered how socially awkward people have sex…and now I know.
wow.
Oh dear oh dear oh dear (about the comments, not the post well…actually, the post too)
Funny, I was just thinking the exact same thing! I was going to alternate work with wax this morning. I’m anticipating some additional mileage this weekend. I should probably sort out the junk in the trunk as well.
Disparate Discourse:
Cupid’s fool? Not necessarily. Sex isn’t love, granted; but when you look at the Venn diagram, there is overlap. I’m going to take Harlan at his word. Love it is.
It’s too bad Captain and Tennille couldn’t accommodate an extra syllable in their song. Wolverine Love might have had real promise.
The car I drive, on the off chance anyone’s interested, is older, but clean. I find a brisk rub is good for her finish. And new rings made her perform better, it seems. In light of recent accounts, though, I hope she doesn’t throw a rod.
I’m last to the joke, as usual, but trying. Oh, and to pre-empt the detractors, I already know the Venn diagram of yours truly and the cool crowd are oceans apart.
Oh, I don’t know E, my venn diagram probably has a larger zone of overlap than yours (being a chick and all) but I doubt they’re significantly different. Or are you saying that, for the cool kids, there is no overlap between the two subsets? Ohhhh, wait, you’re saying the cool kids don’t have a venn diagram at all. Ah well, I wear my big geek hat proudly.
You’ve got the sense of it, Ernie, but I expect what you’re driving is not actually a cootchie. Please keep trying. Maybe you could come up with some appropriate lyrics to Wolverine Love.
Oh, Moshizzle? I thought for sure you were one of the coolest cubes in the tray — cranial at times, but still cool. BTW, all I was saying via Venn was that I know I’m not one of the cool ones.
Thanks for the encouragement, Chuck. I thought maybe the hoohoo was the car itself and that the driver could be the one putting it through its paces. Oh well, it’s not the first time I ever dented a comic quarter-panel.